commentary

Text D: Formal to colloquial.

Budget day is 1 of the best days in the year 4 parliament. The budget covers the Gov's taxes 4 the next yr and stuff. The Chancellor has been tlking about the 'Red Book'. LOADS of secrets are kept about the budget and a lot of people are tlking about this l8tly, lots of people are excited about this speech thing as well.


Text C: intimate to Frozen

DARLENE: Good-den spouse
TROY: Quickly the baby will greet.
DARLENE: TROY?
TROY: The baby is yaw quickly!
DARLENE: Oh the barn! That's our little living Krystal.


In text D to make it colloquial i used homophomic representation, which is to use numbers to substitute words, this is often used to be chatty in texts to friends or writing in a diary like in text A on the register sheet. I also used specific jargon which usually wouldn't be in this form of register but because i had to change from another register i still had to include it in some form, so i changed words such a Government to Gov to fit the register to make it chatty and informal. I also used synonmy's because in the original text it said 'secrecy' but to me this seemed too formal so i changed it to a simular more used word such a 'secrets'.